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A Heart of Stone: Chapter 1 by BorgiaBrony A Heart of Stone: Chapter 1 by BorgiaBrony

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Hey there guys!

Here's my attempt at a fanfic! Fair warning its a Dislestia shipfic (albeit a light one) so if that isn't your cup o" tea, be aware.

Going to try to update this as often as I can, but working around school can be a pain sometimes. My first attempt at writing anything really, so constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated!

Part 2: [link]

Discord, Princess Celestia, and My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic are all the property of Lauren Faust, Studio B, The HUB, and Hasbro.
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fotland42 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
I'll point out that general convention is go with the equine gestational period of 11 months, not the human one.
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AAV-sama Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good start for the story! I'm starting to like the pairing, after working on my own fanfiction. I really thought it was funny how Celestia views the oncoming little Luna as a threat... So cute. Quite independent she is, too. Very noble of her to try to look after Discord while not even knowing what the creature is. I like the way the story is told, gives it a laid-back feeling of some sort, especially with that comment about her not being a five-star chef! ^^ I look forward to reading more!
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tanookihammerbro Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
Nothing is showing.
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BorgiaBrony Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
I have it posted on fanficton.net as well as fimfiction. You should be able to read it there.
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Chrisarttuff Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012
y donde esta la imagen
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AngelicDragonPuppy Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Excuse me, but can you point me in the direction of the cover image? ;w;
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BorgiaBrony Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
Sure thing. The piece is here: [link] And yes, Mn27 gave her permission to let me use it.
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AngelicDragonPuppy Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! Best of luck to you and your story :)
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stephan989 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
To be honest, if I see something scary, My first thoughts are not to get anywhere near it! Never-mind grabbing it with my mouth, and dragging it through a maze, up some stairs and into my House! then leaving it in a room with precious and irreplaceable books overnight!
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Geo9955 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011
Great story so far and the only thing I noticed that was "wrong" so to speak was that the equine gestation period is typically around 11 months instead of 9 but nothing to detract from the experience. Keep up the good work and i'll be looking for more from you :w00t!:.
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TwilightKat64 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011
I'm really intrigued by this story but I can't read it (my stupid computer hath cursed me again). Is there anyplace else where you uploaded this so I may read it please?
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BorgiaBrony Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011
[link]

I posted the story on fanfiction.net. You should be able to see it there.
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thejayowl Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011
i can't see it???
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BorgiaBrony Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011
[link]

I posted the story on fanfiction.net. You should be able to see it there.
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thejayowl Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
thanks soo much. it sounds like a really good fic and i have read a bit and im liking where it's going. Keep up the awesome work
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Razvan563 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Student Writer
Nice well done well done indeed :clap:
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Ziblink Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Ouch! Role reversal!


Nice naming on the parents too.


Also, What the hell princess? Do you know how long it took to grow that maze? The love and care that went into it? Did you think before demolishing it? What if somepony had been in there? (Maybe they were, look for a small pile of ashes.)
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whitelighter5 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011
Want to see more plz!
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Triple-A-Battery Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I like it! Can't wait for the next one!
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MissKillerSparkles Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it so far~ Can't wait for more <3
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Ghost-Peacock Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Student General Artist
Is there any way to read it on say Fan fiction? I really wanna see this but I don't have the program t view the story?
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Ziblink Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
N open office or word?

Firefox mebbeh?
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BorgiaBrony Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011
Yeah, I'm going to try and upload it to Google Docs and Fan Fiction when I finish chapter 2 (hopefully by Sunday afternoon.)I was originally going to wait until I had three chapters done to post anything, but my friend wanted to read it ASAP. Sorry for the wait.
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