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I'm not promising anything, but a new entry every two weeks seem likely at this point. As always, opinions are appreciated.
Here's the story of fanfiction.net if you can't read it here:[link]
Chapter 4 is up now! [link]
Discord, Princess Celestia, parasprites, and My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic are all the properties of Lauren Faust, Studio B, The HUB, and Hasbro.
i'm commenting on your other chapters to. some grammatical errors that i can look past but are still irratating, some of the writing is just off; in this chapter you says discorded clutched something in his fist twice. we already know he's got leaves in his hands, just say beams of light radiated out of his had.
there was another part where you wrote "He turned around and looked at her. “Following you, of course!” He
snapped and he vanished in the typical “flash of light” fashion. instead of "he snapped and he..." you should say "he snapped as he", this makes the sentence flow better and fixes some syntaxes. and "the typical "flash of light" fashion" is something i'd hear in a middle school english class. try "he vanished in a flash of light with the snap of his fingers." not only does that flow better and make more sense, but adding the finger snapping shows even more how composed and confident discord is around celestia, which i'm sure after the way this chapter ended will tie in to how their lives change together.
so in the long short of it, great story and i love it, i just really think you should get someone to proof read it before you upload it. or hell, send it to me and i'll proof read it, i'll turn your J.K. Rowling into Ernest Hemingway (relatively). can't wait for the next chapter! you're in my watch list!
As for the errors, I did send these through a review thread on ponychan, so I don't want to point fingers but...(points finger at ponychan reviewer)
Anyway, good job. It's very cute, and Discord is, as always, awesome.